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Wednesday, November 26, 2014


"Look out!" said Mickey Mouse.
It was a toasting hot day at the pool.  Mickey the lifeguard was hot. He wanted to cool off.  He tried to open the pool gate but it was locked.

Mickey tried climbing over the gate but it was too slippery. He tried an axe but it was too strong.  He tried going sideways but it was too small.  He tried sliding under but the gap in the fence was too small.  He tried a key.  It worked.
"Cannonball!"  SPLASH!
Mickey was sinking.  He was too heavy.  Minnie looked outside but no one was outside .. but Mickey was.  Mickey swam up, he got his doughnut ring.  He sprinted into the pool.  He was relaxing.
"Oi!" said Minnie.  "Get out of there!"
"Jump in," said Mickey.
"OK, I will," said Minnie.

1 comment:

  1. Dear Lucas

    This story is AMAZING! I can't believe that you are only five years old! I love how Mickey tried so many ways to get into the pool. You are a wonderful writer. I am so proud of you!

    Love Mrs Lunn